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This is my first Tale on the site. I hope you all enjoy it! If you need me, I'll be staring at a rating module while mercilessly beating the refresh button.

There isn't enough here. It's an image but a story can be more than that.

I for one enjoyed the brevity, if only because I imagine the reason further days or shifts weren't described was to illustrate that every single one is the same and emphasize the monotony of life after the Cake-pocalypse.

Keter cake is best cake.

a lovely idea. The worst part is, ironically, there isn't enough to satisfy me

Premise was interesting, and I do think this planet is big enough for multiple Keter Cakes stories. The problem really, as stated by other users above, is that there just isn't enough here. The snapshot is compelling, and makes me want to know more about the world you're building, and then it ends as things get interesting.

Nice. Keter cakes has always been one of the more ridiculous skips, but always one of my favorites. I like this a lot.

Cakework is an emotional, strong piece. I could not believe it when I started reading it, that Keter Cakes would be such a threatening, reality-breaking horror. I mean, sure, intelectually I could see why this would be absolutely horrid… but you made me feel it.

Unfortunately, this falls a bit short of other entries out there. It is strong, it is original… but I think I'll upvote it after the contest due to shortness. Otherwise, excellent work.

The bit with the cigarette was a very nice touch. I feel like a story should only be as long as it's content, and you managed to say a great deal with fewer words than most. +1 and thank you for the pleasure.

hahahahahahahaha oh gods

okay I do feel like you could've gotten a touch more out of this (not necessarily much longer, but get more out of what you already have), but I like what you did accomplish.

The tone of the story and the description of the cakes themselves really did it for me. Many good turns of phrase and details, too: "thick and sweet and noxious", the stifled sobs, "hideous, yellow glory". The entire wedding cake paragraph is glorious. As are the closing lines.

So yeah, you probably could've done more, but you did such a good job with what you did post that I don't care. +1