I like the base idea, but the last addendum is Lolfoundation, and there are formatting issues. Novote for now.
Edit: wasn't there an interview log before, which seemed pretty good? what happenned?
It is not a bad idea, but it needs some work, there are some formatting issues and redundant phrasing, not necessarily a terrible thing, but it isn't helping your article.
Pretty good idea, but formatting seems off.
The lolfoundation would have made me downvote, but it made me smirk, so it's a hesitant upvote for now.
Have a boy!
The addendum with the references to 076 and 682 and saying that personnel will be penalized if they does not follow orders is something that was common years ago, but it became really unpopular now as the community grow tired of it. I recommend to remove it entirely.
Get rid of the addendum. Also, an interview log might be nice to add some personality to the character, because right now it seems kind of boring and the story doesn't really go anywhere.
Definitely remove the addendum.
Also, compare to SCP-457. It's different enough, but is it interesting enough to have it separate?
I really really like this idea. I never read the original addendum, but definitely consider adding some creature dialogue (perhaps Portuguese + translation) or an interview as stated above.
Also, I would love to see an actual thermal photograph of this thing; it would definitely improve if not completely replace the need for a written description :)
EDIT: Awesome pic, you got a +1 from me, buddy. Well done :)
Wouldn't this be Keter? It seems like it has fairly strict and lengthy containment procedures that could result in disaster if not followed to the letter.
So does SCP-447, but it's a safe class. Keter usually means that it can't be contained by normal methods, if I'm not mistaken. Normal by the foundation's standards, that is.
The difference is SCP-447's containment procedures can be summarized into "Keep it awy from dead bodies and your fine." This one isn't as easy to summarize. This one requires constantly deoxygenating its chamber and if there's even a minor equipment failure here, we have explosions everywhere and an extremely demanding recontainment procedure. If there is a small equipment failure for 447 then as long as the Foundation isn't leaving dead bodies around the worst that happens is the floor needs to be cleaned.