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Theme: Light Up The Night by the Protomen

So here's my contribution to the Black Autumn Series, albeit extremely late. Eventide finally gets its place in the story, and the hidden players step into the light.

Shout outs go to:
Ihp for helping lay down the groundwork for this tale, as well as providing insight onto eventide and black autumn.

Kybard and ManyMeats for greenlighting this tale and giving their honest critiques about it.

engie and Simartar for providing their line-by-line crits and nitpick.

Calibri Bold for being a supporting figure, and Dyslexion for support.

Many thanks also to anyone else I forgot to mention and also #site19 and #thecritters in general.

Enjoy!

There are some elements of this I could definitely take or leave, and the page theme is something I could see really hating on a mobile at home on the couch. But, I am on a machine in a brightly lit office, and I respect the ambition.

Overall worth a +1.

A) wonderful choice of music. I was wondering if that was a protomen reference when I read that.

B) while I enjoyed the tale, I feel like it needs some polishing up. There were a few sentences scattered throughout that seems to be missing a few words, plus an errant 3 that should probably be three. A tentative upvote, with the hopes that it’ll get another read through to catch those errors.

Is the Red Hair guy Agent Tangerine from The Cool War series?