SCP Foundation

Okay! Jamcon entry! first one and my last one because this is a DISASTER i am so sorry
unfortunately this is also my first posted scip so theres probably a lot of errors made on the get go and yea! I understand that. But I'm looking forward to improving slowly but surely :-)

Big big thanks to those who took a look beforehand and gave some idea pointers and crit! Makes me shiver in my stylish boots but extremely useful none the less.

Image Source: https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Brussels_sprouts_(3646093654).jpg

Some things I don't really care for, but my suspension of disbelief breaks really easily when people just have the number for the Foundation. You don't just have the world's biggest secret in the yellow pages.

That aside, the angle this is approached at isn't really too appealing, either? I guess I don't understand why Lorance needs these sprouts so bad. He even says that it's possible for him to just make more:

[…] and if I don't get them back I'll just as well grow more myself! If I can. And I will.

So I guess I don't understand why it's so important that he gets these specific sprouts unless they are his life force, and if they are, why is he feeding them to people? The logic is inconsistent, from what I can tell.

From my understanding this was a crazed and possibly anamolous chef who’s intent was always just to bring the best sprouts to the masses. Sad that his end came from such a heinous act of inner espionage but I suppose all greats end from within.
Interesting if not short read +1

What, the Foundation never looked into that pizza chain down the street mentioned in the letter?