SCP Foundation

A great page, simple yet with enough substance to intrigue (at least me). My main complain is that Dr. Thurston experiments, while entertaining, distract from the effects of the SCP. The effects seems to become less anomalous as entries progress.

I would suggest adding entries from another doctor later on. Those should either progress into more and more complex result, or progress the same way, implying that the usage of this SCP will cause that result due to some unknown mechanism.

This attempts to hit the same sort of notes as SCP-348, but falls flat for a number of reasons. The first reason is that, unlike 348, this relies on incompetence and complete ignorance of the scientific process from the researcher involved to even arrive at this emotional situation. The second is that the ending, where a final gut punch really makes it work for a reader, is a reassignment note which only exists to promote an almost entirely unrelated article.

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I feel like adding an experiment log like SCP-1459 has could elevate this from okay to great.