SCP Foundation

Remains of SCP-5388-2 consisted of a singular piece of it's left wing. Remains were destroyed by personnel.

left wing

destroyed

_{also, it should say "its" not "it's" edit:fixed}

Review

I think the interview was a bit too tedious and also not well-constructed enough. Felt like exposition without the need for it.

However, I loved the narrative - the revolution part and the emperor's descent into desperation as the people uproared against him made me smile. Showing this through his less and intelligible wording as less and less of his subjects agreed to form his sentences was very nice!

It just seems some unnecessary parts were left in. If it had just contained a small interview, minor incident reports and then the revolution I think it would have been better off, you know; less is more-style.
I do wonder if you've read SCP-408?

By the way…

2. It seems that SCP-5388-2 had a very poor understanding of the human language and did not know how to properly conjugate words and form grammatically correct phrases.
3. As of documentation, SCP-5388-2 was seen to be knowledgeable of 16 different languages, including English, Russian, Swedish, Welsh, and Spanish.

… seems a bit contradictory, though I get what you mean. Maybe change it to…

As of documentation, SCP-5388-2 was seen to be knowledgeable of has made attempts to communicate in 16 different languages, including English, Russian, Swedish, Welsh, and Spanish.

…?

If this entry was trimmed a bit - especially the interview - I would definitely up-vote.