SCP Foundation

Given the prior formats, I looked up 2272, and wondered how this could possibly be incorporated into what has gone before. Now we know. You are quite amazing. +1

Bring on Dream #2 and

This is very well-written, which is to be expected, but does not, as far as I can tell, move the plot of the story forward in any meaningful way. I am sure that the ending will prove fantastically important and the Rosetta stone that makes everything fall into place, but it's a bit frustrating that, after six tales, it still feels like we're going through the set-up prior to the action.

Still, that writing, tho. So a +1 for this.

My one complaint is that we did not see much of the man himself.

Sorry, but a huge -1. That ending had me cry out in terror, and as we all know there's no crying in baseball!

Seriously, I'm really looking forward to see how this all ties together with the hands/dream-based entities and primes.

After Action Reports are usually not my most favorite things, but this one is both suitably creepy and gives a clearer picture of how the Foundation works in the field. The ending is unnerving and I'm very curious to see what all the hand imagery is, er, pointing to.

Excellent. This is a good example of containment in process, and I'm just really impressed at how you were able to 001 2272. (What is this, code?)

I remember when that skip got written and being pretty impressed with it then. Also I remember looking up the Blue Wahoos player it was based on. I've kept up with him since then.

It may interest you to know that he actually has moved up to the Reds: http://www.milb.com/player/index.jsp?player_id=596112

Got to hand it to you, Kal, this was a fun read that had me on the edge of my seat. AARs have a tendency to get dry quickly when the details get piled on, but this kept on amping up through out to a very satisfying ending.

+1. Very well done.

Unlike a typical team photo, this photo was taken at night, under the stars. Nine moons could be seen in the sky.

The likelihood that all nine moons would be in the background of this one picture are vanishingly slim. That's probably only a small section of the sky and, statistically, about half of the moons would be on the other side of the planet. I get why it's important to say this though so idk what to tell you!

so… what happened here exactly?