In Soviet Russia, anomaly contains you.
This is an SCP of firsts for me. First SCP of the new year, first contest entry of the year, first SCP in four months, first exploration log SCP, and first GRU Division "P" SCP.
This is also part 0 of 1. Be sure to check out the sequel: T Minus.
I owe a huge debt to the boys in blue and silver: GreenWolf,
Jacob Conwell,
Taffeta
TyGently,
TwistedGears,
Roget, and
Apoplexic for reading, re-reading, and then re-re-reading it and helping me nail down stuff like tone, pacing, dialogue, and elements of style.
I owe a major debt of gratitude to djkaktus - he actually took the time to speak with me over the phone and help me make this the best it could be.
Many thanks to LurkD,
weizhong, and
Vezaz for draft review.
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Good thing this anomaly is contained in Siberia, cause its so cool.
In all seriousness I'm glad to see it posted.
I like the sneakiness of GRU P in essentially reprogramming Stalin's propaganda machine into an antiwar vehicle, and their subsequent use of said anomaly to prevent the Cuban Missile Crisis is a creative bit of tying this into the political climate of the era.
Additionally, the exploration logs are fun, and really amp up the tension to what is, in my opinion, a very satisfying revelation at the end.
+1 ARD. Good show.
This is super fucked up, and I normally think I wouldn't enjoy something like this. But I really do, it's really great. I think it's the entire angle of the pacifist Gru-P or something but this was fucked up good, dude. I hope you win the thing, imo. So far.
Here's another one for the GoIs that should be subordinate to their government, but decide to do things their way. Interesting interpretation of GRU-P, which adds more flavour than being an appendage to the Soviet imperial machine.
Unsettling, dangerous, out-and-out weird, everything a skip should be. Upvoted primarily for the good exploration logs.
Two questions: Why the references to orichalcum and electrum? And why would the Foundation ever employ people with psionic abilities? I mean, they should be locked up and studied, yeah?
Why the references to orichalcum and electrum?
There's a couple stories on the site that connect orichalcum to that much maligned metal Telekill. I wanted to maintain the idea that orichalcum messes with psionic abilities without saddling it with Telekill's history. I also mentioned electrum because I headcanon that it's a psionically dampening material like orichalcum, but without the side effects and thus more suitable for wearable protection; kind of like tin vs lead solder.
And why would the Foundation ever employ people with psionic abilities? I mean, they should be locked up and studied, yeah?
I mean, sure there's probably a more than few dangerous psychics whom the Foundation and other GoIs have incarcerated, but on the whole, this version of the Foundation believes that saying "Here, we'll pay you money to use your mind-reading, telekinetic, wireless communicating, people-influencing powers for the good of mankind" is easier and much more cost-effective than abducting people from their homes in the middle of the night. Plus, it's much more interesting and enriching from a storytelling perspective to have a Psionics Division in the Foundation - it opens up the door to all kinds of psychic escapades.
Admittedly, you couldn't tell this story the same way without having someone communicating telepathically through someone else, and that ultimately justifies using it.
As for the metal, that's funny, because I kept thinking "What about Telekill?"
Fantastic. Gruesome. Uncomfortable. Confusing, but that's the nature of it. Great logs, although I find the language used between the squad a TINY bit unconvincing- they were very casual when faced with such an extreme situation.
A well deserved +1
This was phenomenal. The wonderfully ominous SCProcedures immediately reeled me in, and set the tone for the article in the right way. There's a lot to love throughout; psychic MTF force (and the little bits of world-building surrounding psionic warfare), the rouge GRU-P dooming the world trying to save it, the exploration log…
Damn, that exploration log. I do love me some exploration logs. Here, it's expertly crafted. It's the right mix of weird and wrong, and the way you tell it was brilliant.
Very solid. A must read. Enthusiastic +1
I'm afraid the exploration logs kind of lost me, what with all of the members of the task force seeming to psychically communicate using the two involved. The rest of it is good, but I'm afraid the confusing nature of the logs pushes me into a no-vote.