I thoroughly enjoyed this. Special mention: Bozomorph as a technical term for HFCD Clowns.
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Metaphysician.
Lolly nodded and mimed zipping her mouth shut and tossing away the key, unaware that a passerby passerine would later recover the imaginary item and use it to unlock a Way leading to a plane comprised solely of thought-forms
+1
That list at the end is about three times too long - it really kills the pacing, and would benefit from concentrating the funniest material.
That said, there is too much other good stuff in here not to upvote - one of the best in the series for its lightfootedness and well-delivered gags, especially in the early going.
List almost killed it; it's too long I think. But the rest of the tale made up for it.
Sidenote; this doesn't need… ALL of those GoI tags, right?
I enjoyed it, though I'm a sucker for "Things X Isn't Allowed to Do" lists so I might be a bit biased. I do agree that it might be better off having the full list as a separate page, though - by the end I had to scroll back up to remember what was going on.
I don't laugh often, but this did it. The jokes were well timed, and their controlled randomness fits in well with the Circus of the Disquieting theme. (I also loved the kiwi on the council.) Anyways, +1 from me.