(account deleted) 01 Jun 2012 04:34
Some minor edits, but it looks good to me.
+1
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(account deleted) 01 Jun 2012 04:34
Nor am I, but when I tried to redact the doctor's name in the containment procedures before, multiple people had took issue with it.
Could definitely use an in-depth spelling/grammar/punctuation check, but the actual object itself is fairly good. With permission I can give this a good once-over over the weekend as I'm going to be up to my neck with stuff all night.
Sure, it seems no matter how many times I go over it myself I seem to miss one or two.
Sorry for taking so long with this, I was a lot busier over the weekend than I thought I'd be. I fixed up as much spelling, punctuation and grammar as I could find, and tied together a few bits of somewhat chunky sentence structure (as well as added one or two bits that I hope are okay)
If you see anything in here that contrasts too much, feel free to edit it back how you had it.
I reverted some of it, but not all.
Just as an FYI, the term actually is "Compartmented": http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sensitive_Compartmented_Information_Facility
I saw the name of the SCP and it reminded me of how my phone will random connect to the Internet or set up a text without any interaction. I called it a phantom virus/app ironically.
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