As I said, I think you nailed the graveyard's tone in this one.
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(account deleted)I really like this, and have upvoted accordingly. However, I echo Hyaenaboy's comment above.
Thanks!
Care to say , though, why do you think it doesn't fit? I thought the disappointment there made sense.
The only issue I have is the term "meh". It's a relatively recent addition to the popular lexicon, and I get the impression that the graveyard is an "older" person, if that makes any sense. So it seemed a little out of place in terms of the syntax being used earlier.
It's a minor nitpick, though, and it didn't really detract from my enjoyment of the tale.
VAE, this is a good tale, and I don't know if you intentionally not put in line breaks given that it's only done once, but if not, can I edit in line breaks? This is such a wall of text that I almost didn't make it all the way through.
I agree. This would be a lot easier to read if it was broken up.
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