SCP Foundation

Thank you to Voct for the idea. Thank you to Troy for getting my ass in gear. Thank you to Echo and Scantron for reviews. Echo also gave me the list name, which is fantastic.

So this is why they keep electing dead politicians?

+1

Ya gotta stick with what works, man.

Pretty good.

One nitpick:

Additionally, such bills are usually phrased in such a way to benefit SCP-1679 in its own unique situation; many would be markedly less effective if enacted in neighbouring towns.

Seems like it could use more elaboration.

This is what I've been telling people we should do: elect the dead guy who screwed things up the least. +1

I'm out for dead presidents mayors to represent me.

Also,

An Agent Matthews imbedded

Wait, wait, wait. He was not elected the first time until he died, was he? And no one seems to notice/care he's dead. Impressive work. You may have my up ore. And wear it proudly.

Question: what if they attempt to assassinate him?

Idea: McMasters was the reverend of the local Fifthist church. Something something something creepy dead mayor. Thoughts?

The concept, writing, pace and tone are all great. I also kept chuckling at the idea itself, which seems to be a tongue-in-cheek reference to several elected officials who managed to beat an opponent from beyond the grave.

Digging the concept. Tone could use a bit of polish but in all it's a solid piece.