SCP Foundation

A collaboration between me and faminepulse. Famine also shooped the image for this article.

The suit is divided into 6 sections
Chest:
Arms/Legs:
Abdomen:
Hands/Feet:
Helmet:

I only see five parts here. Unless you mean the 'divided into six sections, including the head, arms, chest, and legs', which would make for only 4 sections, unless each arm and each leg is a different section. Could you clarify whatyou mean?

Otherwise, don't really get it, don't know how to feel about it.

The biggest question that haunted my reading of it was "how did the thing get the diving suit?"

That question is compelling enough for me to upvote.

I don't even

… Ok. You can have an upvote.

I liked it and planned an upvote until WHOA awkward body parts description, and it became tiresome. No vote

Foundation personnel embedded in the Saipan government

No one finds this interesting?

+1. I like how it's not even necessarily hostile, in my view it was just trying to introduce itself and the network of sea creatures in the hand of the suit is just clumsy.

Nice job - the idea of the 'ambassador to the surface' comes out much more strongly than in the draft. I do agree with MyFatedMethod that the contents of the various body parts could be presented more cleanly - perhaps with a table?

Very neat idea, although it's Octopunch as an SCP. (I cannot get a link at this moment because TFwiki.)

Anyway, I think there are a few things in here that could use smoothing out (the cephalopod, for instance, should probably be -1, since that designation is never used but -2 is), but this mostly just needs a spit-polish to be really good.