सकप-००१
Why are you doing this? This literally translates to "Soup-001" in Hindi (I'm guessing you meant SCP-001?). Why is this in Hindi when the rest of the text is in English? It looks weird and try-hard.
सकप-००१ is to be contained within a mutual relationship only to think it will get it's side of the deal.
Firstly, "its." Secondly, what does this even mean? I read the whole article and I still have no idea.
These are instructions meant to be followed. How are we convincing the thing that it's going to get "its side of the deal" whatever the heck this means?
सकप-००१ is a one-way relationship
Is it a one-way relationship, or is it contained within a one what relationship??
-with the person on the agressing side being humanity.
Humanity is not a person.
We leech off of सकप-००१
White text? Really? How does this make any kind of sense in universe? What is the point of this bit?
that's retarded.
What?? This is a scientific document. Who is even talking, here? Why the random, out of nowhere slur use?
I mean, even if this is somehow a Foundation employee just writing their honest thoughts about this, "retarded" sounds like a horrible word to use — most people who use that word, in that way, are either 12, edgy, or uneducated.
in which is called a "wish"
I'm not trying to be offensive, but is English your first language? I have no idea what you're trying to ask here.
A letter was found in Korea, Seoul by a farmer.
Who was writing? To whom? Under what circumstances was the letter found? This is horribly vague.
Also, why is the letter in white?
It's here because the damn thing will delete everything in the database, we have to give it it's own file either way, it has some sort of anomalous capabilities…
This sounds really clunky and weird, and is exposition heavy in the worst way. Also, "its."
It whites out any important data, so just a giant info hazard.
I suppose that explains the white. But the reader can very, very easily read this. It totally breaks immersion.
Shit, nonono! What's happening to me?
Is he… typing while he's being erased from reality?
Wishing is stupid and I find it unnecessary, I wish wishing was gone.
This sounds childish and totally out of character for a Foundation doctor. Also, I have no idea what this has to do with anything.
