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my first scp, hope you enjoy it and leave valuable feedback! not finished by a long shot. I tried my best to reference some current scps. I don't know if I properly made the links to other SCPs, please tell me if I did and how to do so properly if I did.

http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/margssentif

I moved your thread summary content to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn

There are numerous issues with this draft. Have you read the guides at all?

You're missing the titles e.g. "Special Containment Procedures:" or "Description:" which means it's difficult to tell where the containment procedures end and where the description starts. There's also no object class.

I tried my best to reference some current scps.

1. Why? You don't need to do this
2. The way you've done this is incredibly poor:

SCP xxxx is not permitted to come into contact with SCPs: 1025, 714, 049, 500 or any other medically related SCP outside of testing.

Why would the SCP ever come into contact with these SCP's? This is just referencing for the sake of referencing.

I'll be happy to give a full crit once you've read a few more SCP's to understand how they should be written and re-read the guides here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/how-to-write-an-scp

Currently this draft need a lot of work before it's ready for critique. The first thing to do would be to make sure it has the correct formatting, there is a template in the guides that you can use for this.