I’ll be honest, I expected this to go in a completely different direction than it actually did. I think it worked out alright, considering that that route has already been taken by SCP-3027.
All in all, it’s a pretty well-executed skip. The concept is definitely original, and the execution is good to match it. If there’s any room for improvement, though, I’d say that it’s in the third interview. All it really says is “this joke came out of nowhere!”, and I see nothing that could be lost if either A). it was cut completely or B). it was reworked but with a different motive.
Under no circumstances is SCP-3369 to be transcribed into digital format except on an air-gapped computer during testing
This makes it sound like there’s only one air-gapped computer here to test with. Maybe make “computer” plural instead?
Personnel found attempting unauthorized spread of SCP-3369 and SCP-3369-1 are to be disciplined, amnesticized, and - when applicable - transferred away from Site-28.
I feel like these dashes should be replaced with commas.
All in all, a well-written, well thought-out skip. Upvoted.
