A first draft of my first SCP
https://pastebin.com/3reS3D7n Sorry I couldn't get the sandbox working, don't sugarcoat the criticisms please go all out.
A first draft of my first SCP
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I personally don't critique anything that isn't in a sandbox, especially since refusing to use a sandbox makes it harder for an author to learn how to use the basic wikidot coding properly.
What issues were you having with the sandbox?
Whenever I tried to make the sandbox a error messaged popped up, and I don't feel like going thorugh the difficulty to fix it so I decided to use pastebin instead as it was a second option
Without more information it's really hard to help you at all.
Have you tried making a sandbox under a different name?
What was the error message that popped up?
It says "The ajax request failed. Please check your internet connection or report a bug if the error repeats during your work. code:0" I looked some stuff up and it's either some side effects of some programs I have installed or something else.
Have you tried using different internet browsers, waiting for the error to be resolved, or enabling javascript/cookies for the sandbox site?
If you're hitting an error submitting a sandbox draft to a wiki, you may run into the same issue if/when you try to mainlist a post (because the SCP wiki is also a wiki).
Thanks for trying to help, but as I mentioned before, I have some applications that are, limiting, to say the least. I can just go on a different account to post it, that should work
I can just go on a different account to post it, that should work
…are you talking about wikidot accounts here, or computer accounts? Are you using a parent's computer?
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