Okay, this is on page 3 with no replies, gave you a quick read. Here are my thoughts:
First off, christ on a bike are those some crazy giant image files. The Haeckel_Actiniae.jpg image alone is 15.7 MB. That's absolute murder on mobile devices with limited data plans. If you're going to include images in an article, please properly localize the images and shrink them down. MS Paint can do the shrinking. If you're not sure how to do that, ask for a staff member in Questions Desk and we can help you out with making the images smaller. The larger the filesize is, the longer it takes to load, the more irritated the reader is prone to get.
The Item Designation table doesn't really make sense progression-wise. Why is omega before psi and phi? Were the designations just randomly assigned, rather than in Greek alphabetical order? Also, why is the core anomaly the group meeting itself when it seems like the objects left behind are the primary anomalies? A bunch of people meeting together in a church isn't in itself anomalous. The "3327-AΓ is a large book written in Korean." part made me suspicious because the characters seem clearly Chinese (or potentially Japanese kanji, which they borrowed from the Chinese characters). A quick reverse-image search tells me that the book is "Jikji, Selected Teachings of Buddhist Sages and Seon Masters, the earliest known book printed with movable metal type, 1377." Definitely better-check the images you use if you're going to use images.
Ditto for "3327-AΨ consists of thirty-five (35) deceased human fetuses contained in glass jars." > if these things were in glass jars, they wouldn't have all the womb-tissue-looking stuff surrounding it.
Overall, I just felt underwhelmed. The images don't really match what the audience is supposed to believe about them, and this just ends up seeming to be a generic "cult of the [random thing here]" formulaic draft. Not all the stuff listed in the table is even anomalous (3327-AΩ) and I'm just wondering what I as a reader am supposed to be getting out of this infodump.
Maybe there's something workable in the why behind people worshipping a sea anemone of all things, but right now this is too underdeveloped.
Probably a good idea to put this through a cycle in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum.
