SCP Foundation

SCP-3425's vantage point has all information about itself

I don't understand what this means. What does "itself" refers to? Why is it on the Containment Procedure?

The gate to SCP-3425 has to have maximum security at all times including 3 security cameras, 2 guards and a laser motion detector.

This is kinda a waste of resources, because people who could get unto the moon could just like, blindside the site? going the other way behind the object? It's not like the site envelops the anomaly, it's just placed beside it.

SCP-3425 is a giant oval-shaped clockwork machine planted on the moons surface, reaching 20 kilometers down.

"SCP-3425 is a massive oblong mechanical structure embedded within lunar crust, reaching to the depth of approximately 20 kilometers."

I would suggest changing all mention of "giant" to "massive" or "large". Any reason why the bomb doesn't have a designation on its own?

SCP-3425's bomb can explode if SCP-3425 is not fueled up effectively which can cause an explosion powerful enough to cause a XK end-of-the-world-scenario.

"Detonation of the bomb within SCP-3425 is projected to be strong enough to cause XK-Class scenario. Improper maintenance of SCP-3425 would likely result in detonation."

Why is this ultraimportant fueling procedure not included in Containment Procedure? How do we know that it will explode if we don't fuel it?

SCP-3425 has motion detectors surrounding the top part of itself which are used to detect debris, rocks and other things.

"The topmost part of SCP-3425 contains a series of motion detectors it utilizes to detect debris and other objects."

After the rock/debris is detected, SCP-3425 will eject a pipe which sucks in the rock/debris and will then be melted by flames with a temperature of over 1250°, then will be used as fuel.

"If object of interest, e.g. rock or debris of sufficient size are detected by its sensors, SCP=3425 will eject a pipe to extract the object into itself to be melted and then utilized as fuel."

I mean, I don't know how you gonna burn liquid metals as fuel, but to each their own I guess.

Trash or unwanted things will be given to SCP-3425 three times a week to prevent an explosion.

Oh, there it is. I wonder why is it not in the Special Containment Procedure. Maybe because it's a minor thing, it's not like it could explode or anything.

The gel inside SCP-3425 is a green slimy substance made of traces of nitroglycerin, different kinds of non-nuclear isotopes and a strange complex chemical.

Any particular reason the gel doesn't have its own designation, like SCP-3425-2? Also, non-nuclear isotope is a bit of weird phrasing. Maybe non-radioactive instead? Like, "nuclear" in this context means pertaining to the nucleus of an atom, all isotopes are nuclear but not all of them are radioactive. IDK I'll leave that to the physicist/chemist.

You could just say "The gel contained within SCP-3425 consist of a mixture of chemicals with a trace of nitroglycerin. It is green in color and has {slimy} consistency."

SCP-3425 gel is known to release a chemical called 'Agent Orange' which is a herbicide and defoliant chemical which causes extreme health problems for individuals who are exposed. Agent Orange can give new born babies physical and mental deformities which can include cleft palate, mental disabilities, blindness and extra fingers and toes.

This is just doesn't fit at all. What is Agent Orange? A gas? Liquid? Why does it cause health problem, and why are we exposing it to newborn? This just feel too shoehorned, I mean like, if the bomb explodes there'd be no mother left to give birth anyway so it doesn't really matter but, the inclusion of agent orange in one paragraph and then not mentioned anywhere else isn't responsible of you as a report writer. Might as well not mention it, or if you want to mention it, include it in the test.

The gel caused the same damage as a anti-tank grenade.

And the rest of the test used non-scientific units. There are more than one kind of weapon classified as "Anti Tank Warhead" and I don't think they relied on explosive power—like, Panzerfaust used instead shaped charges to penetrate tank armor. The overall explosive power is not big, but the resulting jet of molten metal cuts through armor like butter. Surface explosion won't really do anything to tank armor, so anti-tank weapons have to penetrate it.

Likewise, "a torpedo" "a REDACTED" and "a Tsar Bomb" are not scientific measurement unit. You could instead use "kilogram TNT", while it's not an actual unit either it's more commonly used unit to measure explosion. Or better yet, just use Joule.