I didn't read the draft. I'm here to correct a misconception.
six (6) hour
Your correction is wrong right here. While in series I, people often used the number (#) format for just about everything, it's very frowned upon to do that now. In the real world, this format is only used for very precise things, like drug prescriptions or monetary transactions. That has been the trend on the wiki, as well — if you look at a lot of crit given here now, you'll see that many people advise against using it.
So, PhamtomGuy is good to go here (though I'd normally type it out as "six" if it's a small number like that).