SCP Foundation

http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/j-e-s-t-e-r

Ignore the bit about "the ultimate troll" - I'm still working on making that interesting/good/existent. I'm just asking for crit on the tale "April 9th, 2690".

Decided to choose this because I wondered, assuming humanity didn't lose the ability to communicate or kill themselves beforehand, how would they respond to the inevitability of SCP-094?

Thanks in advance, J E S T E R.

Hey, grabbing this for crit. Wait for an edit.

EDIT 5:46 PM

Okay, so I'm too tired for a SPAG comb through, but please find somebody to do it. People can be harsh.

I really like this tale. I feel it captures the panic of Earth's destruction, and how humanity's near endless capacity for adaptation can evolve into apathy as something fades from public memory. It's short, but it gets to the point and you don't spend too long dwadling on in exposition. If you change anything, I'd put in more panic and then forgetting, as it's no longer an immediate problem. I like how you ended it though, that's a gut punch.

All in all, I really think this has potential. Go throw it at some people in chat, or find a friend to comb through for SPAG, but you've got something good here.

Good luck!