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Hey Guys, this is my new scp that i'm working on. I'd appreciate any and all criticism you guys can dish out at me and will try to improve and fix any mistakes you guys can see. Thanks in advance!

http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/d4rkseid

I moved your thread summary content to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn

Locking this thread as another exists for the same draft. Reviewers, please comment here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5721426/review-any-criticism-please

As noted in the draft forum guidelines: authors, please do not create multiple threads for the same draft. Using one thread helps keep spam down, and prevents flooding of the forums with repeat threads. Furthermore, it helps reviewers a lot if all corresponding feedback is kept in one place for efficiency of reference and discussion.