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The entire collective SCP Crit team community: oh fuck not this loser again

hey I'm back and would like some crit on Metamorphosis, a slightly edited version of the last final draft of "What it means to be HumeMan. Thanks in advance!

PS: There's probably a lot of stuff that breaks conventions and there's a reason, so sorry if I have to explain it after you crit, theres too much stuff to mention it all here.

I'm positive I've seen this before. Are you… work-shopping an edit? Did the original get deleted?

Well, I like the article. Something like this happening is a natural result of reality monitoring and stabilizing technology existing, and the article is well-written enough to match the concept. The only thing I can notice that wasn't there is the 3309 reference. I adore 3309 and it mkes sense in context, so I'm in favor of that. Wish I could give better feedback, but those are about all my thoughts.