SCP Foundation

(Admittedly, I'm not sure about Operation Vyzetrit. But that is another tale.)

Another tale written for the TAI challenge.
Researchers have discovered a non-anomalous item, a "processing error" in the Foundation. But are they wrong?

http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/septemberjackal

Tab 3, "As You Pass GO"

Hello! This is a placeholder, I'll be getting this ASAP.

First of all, fuck Monopoly. My family had to toss ours because the bickering got so bad. But that is a tale for another time.

Anyway, I really like the format. Wikidot code is a mystery to me, but this looks really good. The biggest thing I would do to improve upon it would be to include some kind of testing log as an attachment to one of the emails. I feel like that would show the kind of benign nature of the most insidious board game known to mankind (I'd play Jumanji before ever playing Monopoly again). Other than that, it's a cute tale, funny once you get it, and I feel this has potential

Good luck! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to laugh at the mental image of a prison economy running off of Monopoly money.

So this is more of a cementing of what I said in IRC.

The tone shift in here got me good, and I like the change in tone. The arguments at the end are familiar to my own experience with board games. That being said, the Foundation sounds a little too casual for me with the excited "hello!" greetings and the calls to say hi to the new staff member. If you want, this could be furthered by having the opening emails before the game be written as dead-pan serious as opposed to the casual they are now. However, I understand if you want to give off a more friendly atmosphere before turning it sour.

As a last minor thing:

/password skipsecurity

You gotta have a stronger password than that.

Good luck!