Looking for help and critique
I've attempted 2 SCP's, only posting one and having it fail, but scrapping the first. I really like this idea I have but it is a hard one to execute, and I want some help on allowing the grammar to seem more government like, and help with punctuation, and maybe things i should change or add. Like I said i really want this one to pull through so I'm going to need this communities help.
Like to my Sandbox page:
http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/sqashy
I moved your thread summary content to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn
