Okay, so… I'll be totally honest. This is a badly-written draft. Not only are there some general housekeeping issues (your image is enormous… 1.5 MB is way excessive and murder on our readers using mobile devices with limited data plans, the text after the bolded header needs to follow immediately after and not the line below, the huge section of strike-through text can be annoying for a reader to get through, not all of the tags you've used are even tags that the site uses, etc.) you've got sloppy censoring (I recommend reading over this guide on interesting expungment for some tips), lots of simple grammar and mechanics errors (it's means "it is" or "it has", etc.), and a fundamentally boring concept.
This is just a humanoid with a ton of random abilities tacked onto it. While that sort of approach was very common 8-10 years ago, it's definitely not good enough on its own to stand on the site today. Humanoids are actually among the most difficult types of articles to write successfully; if you're really set on writing one, then first take a look at the humanoid writing guide if you haven't yet.
I recommend getting the base idea polished up in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum before you try fixing the draft. Go to that forum, post a quick summary of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone asks), and reviewers there can help you make this into something that's more worth drafting.
