Since I have no courage to PM any veterans…I have refresh this page more than a hundred times…..
Yeah, uh… if you find yourself refreshing that many times, the IRC chatrooms are probably better for you. The forums move very slowly, and none of the reviewers get paid for the time and energy they put into helping people out in their own spare time.
With regards to the draft here… while it does look professionally-formatted, in that it seems to follow a template that a real-life clinic might use, it still suffers from many simple grammar and mechanics errors (e.g., "Other related research of PTSD in abnormaity is also explored and discussed in the next paper" has a typo, is missing words needed for general English cadence, and also generally an abstract focuses on the paper at hand, rather than future works (or maybe it's just the word "next" being misused here)) and it's unfortunately kind of boring.
The main issue for me is that this seems to be overly-derivative of SCP-1830 itself, without really providing much immediately new information that isn't found in the original article. The multiple writing issues and the clinical report format can also make this both boring for the audience and tough for them to read since the errors will stick out.
I recommend maybe getting future concepts checked in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum before you start writing drafts, to first confirm that the audience would be interested in reading about what you want to write to begin with. Also, this sort of feels like the writing of someone whose native language isn't English. Maybe download a grammar-checker like Grammarly to help with that?
