SCP Foundation

The setup to this is, admittedly, interesting. I can't say how the Foundation was able to determine that a child's toy was sentient (especially since it's only capable of expressing itself in two worth phrases), and while that does give me some pause it's not a death knell.

The larger issue I have with this is (besides the unnecessary blackboxing seriously you don't need to blackbox names and dates nobody cares) that it all feels like setup, and then there's no payoff. There's nothing narratively interesting about it - it's just a toy that the Foundation has decided is sentient. Neither of the addenda do anything to further any semblance of a plot.

The second addendum specifically breaks so far from clinical tone that it nearly gave me whiplash. These lines:

SCP-3736 is shown to be aware that it is not human and shows respect for those who care for it. It holds a great amount of love for people and shows kindness towards anyone who speaks to it.

-actually, physically caused me discomfort. They're so out of place in this format it's staggering. The rest of this:

It can differentiate between who uses it and seems to possess a photographic memory. It is unknown how this is possible due to it lacking any human senses. It is presumed that SCsP3736 holds some sort of telepathic quality that allows it to communicate with humans and recognize them.

-establishes information that the Foundation cannot possibly know. I will extend my disbelief far enough to encompass "the Foundation has figured out how to establish a test for sentience", but I cannot do the same with "the Foundation knows whether or not a toy's memory is photogenic and/or that it is telepathic." That's absolutely buck wild and there's no way the Foundation would have that information.

Then it just stops, and you're left frustrated by the lack of something worth digging your teeth into. I don't think I would downvote this (because I'll admit the dialogue is cute (even if the doctor's questions are insane things to be asking a toy, regardless of whether or not it can think)), but I certainly wouldn't upvote it. It's just not interested in doing anything more than it does, and frankly that's just not enough.