SCP Foundation

My debut article for the Doomsday Contest. Yes, I cut it a little close. Nothing spectacular or revolutionary, but I hope people will like it.

Thanks to my teammates Pilzening, AkariStar, and AnteaIntraTandem.

Hmmmmm.

To be honest, I feel that your team was able to convey this scenario with more urgency in the Nobody GoI Format, and with more vividness in "A Small Town in Arizona." This article doesn't really bring anything new to the table, and instead simply reads as a replay of the tricks you already showed us in the previous contest entries.

If there was a more in-depth exploration of the fused individuals, or hell, even a picture of combined topographies, you'd have a little more meat here. However, it just reads as treading over the same ground again.

-1.

Honestly, I think this is pretty decent. In comparison to some of the stranger doomsday scenarios in the contest, it's refreshingly straightforward. I'll agree with Conwell that it's not as vivid as "A Small Town", but it also gets the primary imagery across without any of that tale's inherent flaws. This is a neat localized reality failure sort of effect, and the merging of realities background is pretty original. +1

Decently good SCP, but it is pretty similar to some other scips and doesn't really add anything. I wish there'd been more meat to the article but I'll give it a +1.