Hmmmmm.
To be honest, I feel that your team was able to convey this scenario with more urgency in the Nobody GoI Format, and with more vividness in "A Small Town in Arizona." This article doesn't really bring anything new to the table, and instead simply reads as a replay of the tricks you already showed us in the previous contest entries.
If there was a more in-depth exploration of the fused individuals, or hell, even a picture of combined topographies, you'd have a little more meat here. However, it just reads as treading over the same ground again.
-1.