SCP Foundation

Regretfully downvoted. It all seems like a bunch of "We are macho, here are our swear words and jargon also we shoot things" to me. The characters didn't stand out to me, I didn't find myself caring all that much about what was going on, and I ended up drifting or trying to scroll faster while reading it.

e: I've tried reading this three times to see if I just missed what everyone else is praising, but I'm not seeing it. It's still just a bunch of jargon between some barely distinguishable soldiers to me. The action's good, but…I don't know if it's the style or the content or what.

I was very entertained.

I for one thought the characters were well-developed. The fight scenes were very entertaining, and the stinger and sequel hook are very intriguing to me as well. +1, looking forward to more.

I was thrown at first by what started to remind me of the author avatar tales of old. I was taken back to the days when writing about Pandora's Box was still cool. This worried me initially. But the character development in this and the way that it was handled once the mission actually began won me over bigtime. Looking forward to more.

"What was the target suspected of again, Bull?" Fartboy asked.

He's on a top-notch assessment team and yet he forgot the point of the mission?

Still, +1 for being extremely engaging, both action and characters.

I like it, but I'm held back from upvoting for the reasons Djoric mentioned. It doesn't click.

I liked it. Well played Clef. Also 'Goats dick' heh.

While the characters start off a bit generic, they seem to come to life at the end. Upvoted.

Upvoted almost, but not entirely, for 'Fartboy'.

I like this view of the GOC. More… moderate.