Brief Summary
It's… a shapeshifting porcupine that wants to get some pootang? I think?
Overall Thoughts
Sloppy writing, sloppy execution, not a great starter idea. You've made an overpowered X-Animal that is not compelling whatsoever. Also, this is not Keter at all.
Formatting
- You need to bold the titles of all of your sections.
Special Containment Procedures
Object Class: Keter
I'm going to stop right now and tell you that Keters are notoriously difficult to pull off well, thus it's usually advised (most commonly by Mack) that you don't attempt these types of skips as your first attempt.
Subject is to be kept in a 10m x 10m chamber at all times with a one way reflective window and with an air lock between the entrance of the chamber and the facility.
Okay, why does the containment chamber need to be a square like this? What's wrong with the one that are already existing? Plus, 10m is about 30ft. That's a huge area.
This chamber is to have a ready supply of Methoxypropane to be pumped into the chamber when required.
1) Repetition of "chamber" is awkward, 2) I don't think "methoxypropane" needs to be capitalized.
This suit is not to leave the air lock. If the suit is seen anywhere else in the facility it is to be destroyed on sight using concentrated Hydrochloric acid.
Again, unnecessary capitalization. Furthermore, what the hell? Do you just expect people to always carry around hydrochloric acid? Would that even work in a real sense? I'm not a chemist, so don't ask me, but that sounds… weird. Why not have a team that's specifically equipped to deal with shit like this?
Description
Its colour is a shade of purples mixed with red stripes across its body and red spirals on its shoulders.
Feels like this breaks tone. Also is starting to feel like a Pokemon.
It has very long and sharp spine like claws on what appears to be its hands and sharp fang like teeth.
How long? How sharp? When you say "spine," are you referring to a spinal column? Like, what the hell? Also, you need some hyphens Actually, no you don't because all the words you would need the hyphens for feel like they break tone. And are they just fangs? Then you should call them fangs.
A very long dagger like tail protrudes from the end of the subject which is covered in smaller spines.
"dagger like" feels tone breaking.
The Subject
Please don't refer to the skip like this. It's alright to say subject or object, but it is not a proper noun.
The Subject is able to mimic any human it sees. It is able to reconfigure its hair to become an exact copy of the human. It is able to change colour of different body parts and changes its size to a degree. It is also able to mimic any voice that it hears.
This is unbelievably repetitive and feels like an X-Manish animal.
SCP-1279 is incredibly fast and agile. It is able to scale walls and hang upside down without any physical signs of strain. An airlock is required on any chamber it is kept in to halt its progress in escaping. It is not known exactly how fast the subject is but it is estimated to be faster than the top speed of a cheetah which is 70 MPH (114 km/hr)
X-Animal. This is bad.
About 30 seconds later Miss [REDACTED] began to take off the suit and then proceeded to remove her clothes.
No.
No no.
Please not ever.
You know what, there's a lot of errors in here, and by this point, they're similar to what I've stated above so I'm not going to point each and every one of them out, but this is very, very sloppy.
