SCP Foundation

Happy Easter, everyone! Hope you enjoyed gorging yourselves on chocolate eggs yesterday *smirk*

Oh, and thanks to Smapti for reviewing this.

You've obviously done your research. Bravo.

This also reminds me of that animal that is not a cat but has cat in its name and can turn into water, and, when ingested, panics and burrows out of the stomach. What was that one?

Bleah! (Throws out chocolate eggs.) +1

This is better than when I reviewed it in the forum, but the tone still needs improvement. No vote for now.

Weirdly interesting. Upvoted.

Seconding what Smapti said. I like the idea, but the tone is pretty shaky at the moment. As a general thing, try to avoid referring to instances of a SCP object as "they/them."

Also, what does "westernized" mean, exactly? You should probably find another way to say it.

Also, also, are the eggs just clones of the father or what?

What have you done to my favorite food? YOU TURNED IT INTO FROGS THAT'S WHAT D:

+1

I'm going to cut all the chocolate eggs I eat in half beforehand now.

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Well-researched, but I don't feel like this does anything special that other oh-so-clever (in-universe) parasites do just as well, if not better. Plus, spending a paragraph talking about the statistics of esophogeal rupture really detracted from the piece.

The article is decent but theres stuff in it that is just plain unnecessary such as the last sentence of the containment procedures and that entire paragraph droning on about esophegal rupture statistics.