SCP Foundation

Thanks to all who looked at this for me! I’ve always wanted to make a skip chase the Foundation, and by happy coincidence, I found that the best way to do that would be to have it take place in a time where they weren’t as big and powerful. Here, they are just starting to get big.

All of these pictures originated from the visual records, Agatha (SCP-1913-1) from artifacts, Telly (SCP-1913-2) from humanoids, and Freddie (SCP-1913-3) from animals.

Anyway, I hope you all enjoy! ЖωЖ

while saving Dr. ██████ from termination

I feel like this should be changed to avoid making it sound like the Foundation was terminating him.

All in all, I'm not sure about this. I'm getting the feeling that this has to do with some sort of myth, like your last article. You know, with sulfur and demons and all.

It's well written, though. That deserves a +1.

Those pictures are terrifying ._.

I know I'll be keeping a tub of sulfur with me tonight.

'Mortal' is not an appropriate word to use. Otherwise, something that chases the Foundation is pretty novel.

Downvote from me personally because it leaves too much unexplained for such a long article. Also

(for example, a knife to the heart or a gunshot to the stomach).

that sentence seems hugely unnecessary

And personally I don't see the point in censoring just the last digit in the dates and the numbers of bodies etc but that's just me.

I enjoyed reading it.
It was very interesting to read.
Plus, the images almost gave me a heart attack (as does everything else…)

+1

I enjoyed it. It certainly leaves me wanting more information, but I've never been the best at picking up subtleties. I'm sure there is some deeper meaning, some backstory that I can't see. Guess I'll have to wait till you clear it up or someone else figures it out and posts it.

The images! +1

Wait, you said there were three entities, but you stated four, SCP-1913-1 through 3, and scp-1913-A. I'm a bit confused.

Over all, I like it.