SCP Foundation

There's probably something major in there that you're wondering about. Let me explain.

So happy this has finally gotten posted. It's excellent; the concept's great and it's developed well, and there's just enough extra inexplicable weirdness to keep you wondering.

I know some people are going to hate the way you've used blackboxing for the sheer visual ugliness, but I think it works.

Wonderfully subtle. I'm glad you're finally doing more with this world

An error, I believe: you say that it was discovered due to an online news story, but the Foundation apparently acquired control of it in the 70s.

As for the SCP itself… I usually like mindfuck concepts, and this one is entirely about conceptual reality versus conventional reality, but there's something… off about it that just isn't clicking for me. You obviously have a clear idea about what this is and what it's doing, but I'm missing something. No vote for now.

+1

Very inviting. I really want to learn more. How did you write this entire thing from a windowless hotel room anyway?

I liked how it started mundane-ish and then slowly built into something sinister. Great job.

Does anyone else have the impression that this is a reverse 055?

+1.

E: Went back and reviewed the highlights again… now I wish I could upvote twice.

Chilling, man. Really chilling.

You've got an SCP-XXX in there, might want to fix it. *goes back to finishing reading*

EDIT: Only reason I didn't fix that myself is I'm not 100% positivie it's supposed to be SCP-1383, so figure it's best to leave alone.

Overall, my first impression was meh…and then I read it again, properly this time. Love it! Subtle and great, have another +1

Now this is one great piece of work. As the others said, I loved how subtle it was.

+1 from me, I look forward to more of your work.

I'm missing something big here. The idea is certainly interesting, but I'm missing the whole mystery behind it. I like the way you ued the blackboxes. At first i was annoyed, but then i checked and was pleased.

No Vote until i get a handle on this. I'm not sure if i'm just off my game or what, but I'm missing a lot of subtleties today…

…other sapient beings (see Addendum)…

Shouldn't this be "see Incident 1383-A"? That's the part where the item with intelligence roughly equivalent to a dolphin's is mentioned…

Also, there is a lot going on here. But I like it. I like the time period it's set in and the sense of a developing story that leads to some tentative conclusions but never really a single explanation. Several good examples of expungement as well.

e: typo