Thinking of making this a series, with stories about how the members of Sparkplug became who they are today.
Please do. You are a really good writer, and I've been really enjoying everything you've been putting out lately
Yes, please. These "Sparkplug" tales are the reason I finally got off my ass and signed up, so I could +1. Some of the best writing I've seen on the site.
You know clef, It's stories like this that make me glad i'm a white, straight, male. God its good to be the majority.
In all seriousness though, 10/10. Normally you'd lose a point for the lack of dragons, but I'll let it go this time.
Hm, I like the story.
Only thing I didn't like is that you started calling her 'Spider' during the middle of the story, no explanation given. I mean, -I- know the reason, I've seen the other stories, but still felt odd to call her that before she said her true name.
Pretty incredible. I've been a fan of your stories, and how you've shaped the GOC in my head cannon. One question: truename- does this have some special meaning or is it spiders full, born name?
Absolutely fantastic. I'd say it's the best thing I've read in awhile, but I've been reading a LOT of your GOC stuff of late. (it's all incredible.) What you seem to be a master of is tension. Realistic, believable tension. It's not just a matter of stating that someone is nervous; I feel the worries, concerns and fears come from the characters themselves.
Add to this that I ADORE team Sparkplug.
All the +1. And then a few. And maybe a few more. Thank you, Clef.
I still love this tale even now. I can relate on some level, and I care for Ara/Spider every step of the way. Also one of the few tales on the site to have a trans character so yaaaaay.