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Thinking of making this a series, with stories about how the members of Sparkplug became who they are today.

Clef, I'm holding you personally responsible for all the hours I'll have to invest on translating the entire GOC canon to Spanish.

Yes, you. You're at fault.

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An upvote isn't enough. This is incredible.

You know clef, It's stories like this that make me glad i'm a white, straight, male. God its good to be the majority.

In all seriousness though, 10/10. Normally you'd lose a point for the lack of dragons, but I'll let it go this time.

Hm, I like the story.
Only thing I didn't like is that you started calling her 'Spider' during the middle of the story, no explanation given. I mean, -I- know the reason, I've seen the other stories, but still felt odd to call her that before she said her true name.

This is good stuff.

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It's great to see the detail that was put into this. I'm annoyed when somebody waves their fingers and *poof* somebody's now the opposite sex. This shows a lot of thought and care. Excellent job!

Pretty incredible. I've been a fan of your stories, and how you've shaped the GOC in my head cannon. One question: truename- does this have some special meaning or is it spiders full, born name?

Absolutely fantastic. I'd say it's the best thing I've read in awhile, but I've been reading a LOT of your GOC stuff of late. (it's all incredible.) What you seem to be a master of is tension. Realistic, believable tension. It's not just a matter of stating that someone is nervous; I feel the worries, concerns and fears come from the characters themselves.

Add to this that I ADORE team Sparkplug.

All the +1. And then a few. And maybe a few more. Thank you, Clef.

I still love this tale even now. I can relate on some level, and I care for Ara/Spider every step of the way. Also one of the few tales on the site to have a trans character so yaaaaay.